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	<title>Comments on: Three sentences off&#8230;</title>
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	<description>writer of science fiction &#38; fantasy</description>
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		<title>By: JS Bangs</title>
		<link>http://www.vylarkaftan.net/2008/03/09/three-sentences-off/comment-page-1/#comment-2756</link>
		<dc:creator>JS Bangs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Mar 2008 20:54:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Didn&#039;t seem like spam trouble to me, unless it&#039;s such severe spam trouble that your server is horked. Ah, well. At least the pingback went through.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Didn&#8217;t seem like spam trouble to me, unless it&#8217;s such severe spam trouble that your server is horked. Ah, well. At least the pingback went through.</p>
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		<title>By: Vy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Vy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Mar 2008 14:58:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hmm. I&#039;ve been having spam trouble and this might be more.  Sorry!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hmm. I&#8217;ve been having spam trouble and this might be more.  Sorry!</p>
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		<title>By: Re: Three Sentences Off &#171; Infinite Recursion</title>
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		<dc:creator>Re: Three Sentences Off &#171; Infinite Recursion</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Mar 2008 14:31:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 13, 2008 at 6:31 am (1)  Vylar Kaftan wrote an interesting post about stories that are three sentences off. I was going to leave her a nice comment, but the server she&#8217;s hosted on ate one comment, and [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] 13, 2008 at 6:31 am (1)  Vylar Kaftan wrote an interesting post about stories that are three sentences off. I was going to leave her a nice comment, but the server she&#8217;s hosted on ate one comment, and [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Vy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Vy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Mar 2008 13:57:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sometimes I can sell them at 99%.  I even get great reviews and so forth.  But more often I get what&#039;s become my most common rejection--the &quot;so close but not quite, please send us something else.&quot;  This is why I really want to see those last few changes before I submit.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sometimes I can sell them at 99%.  I even get great reviews and so forth.  But more often I get what&#8217;s become my most common rejection&#8211;the &#8220;so close but not quite, please send us something else.&#8221;  This is why I really want to see those last few changes before I submit.</p>
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		<title>By: Gray Rinehart</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gray Rinehart</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Mar 2008 13:11:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I consider attention to detail a good thing, but I wonder, are you still selling the stories at the 99% point, or not until you get them to 99.999%? 

Personally, I look forward to the day when my stories are ONLY three sentences off.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I consider attention to detail a good thing, but I wonder, are you still selling the stories at the 99% point, or not until you get them to 99.999%? </p>
<p>Personally, I look forward to the day when my stories are ONLY three sentences off.</p>
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